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towards your heart
my lips to part
and at your shoulders
my eyes do rest

my ear does listen
to your lungs' collapse
from sigh to hum
and hum to sigh

exactly what i need to be
and this being where the end meets me
lying and dieing
as it should always be
©2005-2009 ~awesomesauce
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those moments spent

wising you were only laying

beside the one you love

somuch that you

can feel the touch of their breath

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:iconpertevivro:
Wow....This is very deep...You sure everything is okay?

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Something from inside me screams out...nothing you know is right...
:iconlipsxeyesxback:
*sigh*.....this makes me feel....well, I won't tell you how it makes me feel. Its amazing though.

(I'm sorry i didn't call you love. I will soon)
::stares at you lovingly::

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Wake up little eyes.
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:heart:

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Aiming for an unattainable goal
:iconaperfectfailure:
this is beautiful
u have such a way with words
its simplicity is also very strong
great work

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:iconawesomesauce:
thanks, thats what i was going for.

:hug:

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shall we begin???
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U know u want me...
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Aiming for an unattainable goal

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